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My heart beats fast when I see you
And I find myself lusting
But you want me less
The more I want you

My actions feel desperate
Chain myself to a pole
To try and stop
From calling you

Again…

My desires overwhelm me
Throw myself in the fire
Scorched for no reason
And rejected by you

My mind is made up
No more your adorer
I’ll break through the chains
That tie me to you

I’ll make you not matter…

My heart hurts from the pain
I know you don’t want me
But then everything
Reminds me of you

My temptations grow larger
And I find myself drawn
Back to the torture
Of my one sided addiction

As I reach for the phone…
Well. I recently bought a new album by Fall Out Boy. Pretty good album. Okay, awesome album if I do say so. Been listening to it non-stop and this results in some inspiration and some *shock horror* poetry. Be afriad. I'm happy with most of it but it's now gotten to the point of the night where sleep looks more appealing than editing a poem... so it can damn well stay as it is! :) It'll be fine... I hope...
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agnijith Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2007  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Excellent........ Trust me, I've been through that.
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insanity-streak Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2007
thank you and thank you so much for the fave, it means a lot!! :)
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Oli-86 Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2007   Writer
Great imagery , and those lines between stanzas act like subtitles giving the poem a great effect. Love the theme too.
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notit Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2006
I like it, it's really got me thinking.
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Apsinthion Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2006
aweosme lol...imma comment on this 2.. the hole poem rolls of your toungue...i read t like 5 times cuz i like the way it sounds...jus all fits together....g4 i read it i saw the "Again...." N wa slkike noooooooooooo!!! cuz i hate 1 words getting a line to them selves....poetry is about (in my opinion)...word together as you read them if you get it...but in this circumstance i am totally wrong b/c it sounds good i actualy like it...gonna read it again :)
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insanity-streak Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2006
thank you! you're so nice to take such a detailed look at so many of my poems!!! :hug: i'm so appreciative!
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AshuraMGS2SUB Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2006
Wow, that is creepy. It reminds me of what I was doing for the past 6 months or so. Less stalking like, but more crawling back after being betrayed by someone constantly.

Sorry, I didn't mean that your poetry is creepy. On the contrary, all I can really say is...wow. The way you can write with such morbidity (is that a word?) without it seeming forced or corny is inspiring. I wish I had that sort of control over it with my storywriting. This really speaks to me, especially since have felt like what you've written to an extent at times.

I'm regretting not finding the time to read through your poetry before now. I've definitely missed out. It's a shame that I'm working tomorrow, coz I now don't have the chance to read through the rest of your poetry until another time. I definitely will tho.

Very well done. ^.^
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insanity-streak Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2006
Thank you so much! It means a lot that it means something to you! its amazing! and such a nice comment! Thanks again :hug: you're a legend!
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AshuraMGS2SUB Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2006
Well, I wouldn't go as far as calling me a legend, lol. Seriously, there's no need to thank me. Just saying what I feel. ^.^
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FrozenDruidess Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2005
Never heard of them....maybe I should download some...Ive been stuck on Mars Volta =P
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